Thirteen_Dreams
Grand Senior Literati
Posts : 37
Literary Regard : 250
Join date : 2009-07-13
Age : 35
Location : Brisbane, Australia
 |  Subject: Cyberscape Dystopia Sat Jul 18, 2009 2:26 pm | |
| Pixillated parodies of one unified community
A serpentine corruption of undisguised insanity;
We’re fathoms deep within an incurable disease,
The monitor a window, our souls bared by our keys.
Sallow skin so livid, swathed, bathed in broken light,
The weak spew nameless venom deep into the night;
Too meek to stand alone, they fight with callous words,
Writing with broken speech, render discourse absurd.
Cyberspace proclivities hide malfeascent woes,
Internet communities provide electronic foes,
A generation wasted, slaves to an AI will,
A testament to the fact that even words can kill.
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Rob_Macabre
Grand Senior Literati
Posts : 70
Literary Regard : 336
Join date : 2009-07-09
Age : 36
Location : The Fifth Level of Hell
| | Subject: Re: Cyberscape Dystopia Sun Jul 19, 2009 12:30 am | |
| One of my absolute favorite poetical works from you, Chris. I'm glad this found it's way on here. the flow is brilliant, and the message very clear and one that I agree with wholeheartedly. | |
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